I really like the location it was good looking, i look forward to seeing it after you have played around with colour and effects i imagine it will look good. The pace is slow at the start but it made the oar and balls parts more exciting. Overall i tihnk it was effective i think it conjures alot of fun in the audience. Very impressive that you got it in the 2nd attempt.
I think the idea of this video is really creative and especially love when the balls and water are thrown about as the colours and effects look really good. My favourite part of the video was the ending where all the people were jumping around, yet there was the boy in the background standing still and then it followed through the crowd to him. I thought that was really effective and got the message of the whole video across really well. Well done!!
good considering it was only in one take, although i think there are a couple of problems (not major but could affect the overall video), these being a couple of moments where it seems more obvious that the whole thing is being played in reverse, and I think it could have been better if you didn't show the guy's face that was holding the 'Gpd' cardboard. The message may have been stronger if you hadn't.
Obviously you can't really cut but the only thing I can think of to play around with it is speed and cropping.
Adam this is a really interesting piece of work and it must have been great fun to work on. The idea of doing the video all in one shot is a very good one and I can see where you have got your inspiration from. I would possibly edit the pace and the colour effects with after affects a bit more, as you have been doing just to try and add a bit more liveliness to the video. I do find it a little slow at times when Dan is merely walking round the field it can be a little tedious, but it is nothing a bit of editing cant rectify! I would also shorten the walking away scene at the end just slightly as I also feel it makes the video longer than it needs to be. Apart from that it is a great piece of work, well done mate! :)
I think, after watching your video, that it is really effective with being one shot. I really like the way that you have thrown the balls over him as the colours are bold and really catch your attention. The end although unusual works well with the rest, and i think that the use of the signs helps to illustrate some of the songs meaning.
Overall I think that what you have achieved is effective towards both the audience and towards the song.
I think the idea of the video was very creative and original. I like the setting because it's really simple, but because it's quite plain, you can do a lot of different things with it. I think it's good when you have things going back in time like the coloured balls and the water. Overall I think it's a really good video. Good work!
I dont think that you should worry about the end where they hold hands because it is where the link is made, religion joins people together and once the guy in your music video has chosen god, he then links with him so I think it works well! The fact you did it in one take is so cool and you should be proud. Im not sure about the background having houses in it, perhaps you should find a place where its simply just land! other than that I liked it!
I really like the location it was good looking, i look forward to seeing it after you have played around with colour and effects i imagine it will look good. The pace is slow at the start but it made the oar and balls parts more exciting. Overall i tihnk it was effective i think it conjures alot of fun in the audience. Very impressive that you got it in the 2nd attempt.
ReplyDeleteI think the idea of this video is really creative and especially love when the balls and water are thrown about as the colours and effects look really good. My favourite part of the video was the ending where all the people were jumping around, yet there was the boy in the background standing still and then it followed through the crowd to him. I thought that was really effective and got the message of the whole video across really well. Well done!!
ReplyDeletegood considering it was only in one take, although i think there are a couple of problems (not major but could affect the overall video), these being a couple of moments where it seems more obvious that the whole thing is being played in reverse, and I think it could have been better if you didn't show the guy's face that was holding the 'Gpd' cardboard. The message may have been stronger if you hadn't.
ReplyDeleteObviously you can't really cut but the only thing I can think of to play around with it is speed and cropping.
Adam this is a really interesting piece of work and it must have been great fun to work on. The idea of doing the video all in one shot is a very good one and I can see where you have got your inspiration from. I would possibly edit the pace and the colour effects with after affects a bit more, as you have been doing just to try and add a bit more liveliness to the video. I do find it a little slow at times when Dan is merely walking round the field it can be a little tedious, but it is nothing a bit of editing cant rectify! I would also shorten the walking away scene at the end just slightly as I also feel it makes the video longer than it needs to be. Apart from that it is a great piece of work, well done mate! :)
ReplyDeleteI think, after watching your video, that it is really effective with being one shot. I really like the way that you have thrown the balls over him as the colours are bold and really catch your attention. The end although unusual works well with the rest, and i think that the use of the signs helps to illustrate some of the songs meaning.
ReplyDeleteOverall I think that what you have achieved is effective towards both the audience and towards the song.
I think the idea of the video was very creative and original. I like the setting because it's really simple, but because it's quite plain, you can do a lot of different things with it. I think it's good when you have things going back in time like the coloured balls and the water. Overall I think it's a really good video. Good work!
ReplyDeleteI dont think that you should worry about the end where they hold hands because it is where the link is made, religion joins people together and once the guy in your music video has chosen god, he then links with him so I think it works well! The fact you did it in one take is so cool and you should be proud. Im not sure about the background having houses in it, perhaps you should find a place where its simply just land! other than that I liked it!
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